A certain man had a leg removed.
That same man’s in a coma now
in a hospital room with a single feather,
lying unnoticed in its darkest corner.
He a crocus, yellow and asleep:
an albino rabbit, dozing in old snow.
Was this man hurt in the war?
Will he awaken to let praises roll
from a bloated tongue,
or die—straight from that coma—
now that the air has absorbed
a vapid symbolism?
first published in Left Facing Bird


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May 29, 2008 at 4:42 pm
Jen
Hi Helen! I replied to the comment you left me on my blog, and I asked a question as well. I really do want to hear back from you on that one…thanks!
Jen
May 29, 2008 at 7:21 pm
Jana
Such a sad piece.
May 29, 2008 at 10:20 pm
helenl
Hi Jen, I left a comment on your blog.
Hi Jana. I guess it is.
May 30, 2008 at 12:04 am
Karen Hopper
War has no beauty – and in many cases a life of pain and suffering. You have brought to light much of its ugly sides as to human lives. Very touching.
May 30, 2008 at 12:07 am
helenl
Thank you, Karen.