The trunks of the trees
have grown straight and tall,
shadows fall only where
it’s logical. The trees burned
hot, burned cold, burned like
frost, burned with frost-burn.
The fiery ice of passion let
the trees remain, unconsumed.
Fire colored the rest of the mountain:
Yellow, brown, (a darker brown
than the dirt by the path). Fire
has melted the path-bed—
but not the path—so that the path
is higher than its bed and crowned
to allow drainage in the age that
will follow, when trees—like men—
like Moses will remove their shoes
at the sight of a burning bush.
The sun must have been low this
time of year, this time of day,
which leaves my mind confused.
Confused in those shadows. Perhaps,
the sun was setting, vanishing,
for in the upper portion
of the upper left-hand quadrant,
the sky is nearly black. The ice
on the shadowed cliff—
below the path—was blue.
A person walked on the path,
a building off to its right. A part
of the mountain was covered with ice.
And what else happens in a fantasy:
The age of ice the age of fire
in a time before the parting
of physical laws.
inspired by Miki’s painting, “Fire and Ice“


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May 21, 2008 at 9:39 pm
renaissanceguy
Helen, this is my favorite poem of yours so far. It’s very elemental.
May 21, 2008 at 10:01 pm
helenl
Glad you liked it, RG. I hope you looked at Miki’s painting. I use her description and painting as a starting point for these poems.
May 21, 2008 at 10:10 pm
unfinishedperson
I liked this one too, but I’ve been enjoying all of yours in this series on Miki’s paintings. Are you and Miki planning on a book together? It might be something you two should think about it.
May 21, 2008 at 10:13 pm
helenl
Hi Unfinished Person, Maybe we’ll do a book, maybe not. We just met through Tomas (see my poem in The Centrifugal Eye), I started writing these, and Miki likes them. She lives in France I think. Spends time in Spain etc. Who knows what will come of this?
May 22, 2008 at 4:26 pm
Mike Lovell
Very Nice Poem!!!
May 22, 2008 at 4:29 pm
helenl
Thank you, Mike.
May 24, 2008 at 7:24 am
Miki
Hallo everybody!
It is so nice to hear that you all love Helen’s poems inspired by my paintings. I love them too!!!! Thank you to everybody for your interest, and, of course, thank you Helen, it is a wonderful adventure we are living together.
I have indeed thought about a book together, it would be simply fantastic, and I am sure Helen and me will speak more concretely about it in the future. At the moment, we are just following the path which this encounter marks for us, without really thinking where the path leads. I believe this is the better way to go…
Helen, I will go for a painting trip through Portugal next Wednesday, and will be back about the 15th of July. I think I will interrupt the series of Fantascapes for this time, as I prefer to be present to read your poems “live”!
I will travel through isolated regions, where I guess I won’t have many possibilities to come to the internet, although I will do my best.
In the meanwhile I will program my last bullfight paintings series (they are professionally very important for me!) to be be published regularly when i am away, and I ‘ll start again with the Fantascapes when i come back from Portugal. Is it ok with you?
By the way: I am French, went to Germany then as I was 18, lived there 25 years and live in Spain now.
May 24, 2008 at 11:39 am
helenl
I’m enjoying this so much, Miki. I realize I started in the middle. I wrote about a couple of Spanish villages and several Fantscapes.
I was born and raised in the US, but my mother is English (an naturalized American citizen). I spent eight weeks in England the summer I was 17. I’m 61 now.
May 25, 2008 at 2:55 am
Miki
Dear Helen!
I am enjoying it so much myself, it is for me so much better than to be alone with own art! I guess we will have a long story of….(I forgot that powerful word, you know, when different art forms connect) together!
I just have added for you the “Categories” widget at the bottom of my blog, on the right side. Look under “Fantascapes” and you will find them all, there 17 so far, and there will be more when I come back from my trip.
I spent 6 weeks travelling through England and Scotland last summer, it was wonderful, but I could hardly paint, it was raining all the time! I was so frustrated… This is the reason was I decided to spend the big painting holiday this year in a more southern country like Portugal!