It seems as though it’s always dark,
the Promised Land’s in the smoky air,
someone’s crying.
Small embers hide
under fallen leaves,
yet a Pillar of Fire burns like
God’s voice at midnight—
with the Dream still misunderstood.
first published in Domicile under a different title


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May 20, 2008 at 6:06 pm
Jana
WOW! Helen, this is short but powerful.
May 20, 2008 at 10:38 pm
helenl
Thanks Jana.
May 21, 2008 at 11:07 am
Karen Hopper
I love how in reading just the first and last lines one can understand the meaning of your poem. The in-between is important too and it is great in acquainting us to your inner thoughts. Just great!
May 21, 2008 at 11:12 am
helenl
Hi Karen, Thanks. We should all be crying. The dream is still misunderstood.