Comments on: And In Heaven the Frozen Shall Be Thawed – Comments Welcome

By: helenl

helenl — Sun, 24 Feb 2008 02:56:20 +0000

Hi JustMe, Thanks.

By: JustMe

JustMe — Sun, 24 Feb 2008 01:53:48 +0000

Helen, I think stanzas 2,3, and 4 are a beautiful poem in themselves.

By: Jilly

Jilly — Sat, 23 Feb 2008 19:13:48 +0000

By: helenl

helenl — Fri, 22 Feb 2008 18:06:33 +0000

Thanks Melissa.

By: Poet With a Day Job

Poet With a Day Job — Fri, 22 Feb 2008 17:33:07 +0000

Helen: I enjoyed this poem: I love its multi layers. I was deeply moved by the stanza “far and away in dusk’s purple tint” – the images, rhythm, and sound really take me there, give me such a strong grounding in the horizon…and of course I am amazed by the lines “But what good is confession, if it does not/thaw the heaven-bound?” That is truly the question of the poem, and articulated so well.